This is a very interesting ending for the giver. Although, I think there ould have been some more emotion.As for relevance to the book, the ending is very ambiguous, and open ended. Lois Lowry wanted the readers ot have a choice of how they interpreted the book
- 26/02/2003
- 14:22:09
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Nowhere is it actually stated in te book that elsewhere is a great place. I bet you thought that getting released was fine until it explained the process. The way the book was written, many aspects are open for discussion, and the author does not try to discourage different views with her ambiguous ending.
- 06/02/2003
- 21:12:55
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay flows very nicely. It also does not just state facts, but puts content into the writing. Though, there were a few grammatical errors.
- 04/02/2003
- 16:03:02
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This is a very well written essay, and provides some very good facts that I would not have known. Keep up the good work.
- 03/02/2003
- 16:39:28
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Overall, this piece of writing was very good, but the transitions could use some work. In most essays, personal pronouns are not accepted.
- 03/02/2003
- 16:34:18
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
This is very good, but next time don't use the words in conclusion to start your last paragraph.
- 02/02/2003
- 13:37:27
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
This writing is very good, and forms very clear pictures in my mind.
- 02/02/2003
- 03:07:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Follows a clear path, and explains everything along the way. In the second to last paragraph, January should always be written the same.
- 02/02/2003
- 03:06:26
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Very good essay, with valid points. One thing I noticed is that you have only one paragraph.
- 02/02/2003
- 01:35:48
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A few gammatical errors, but the facts interspersed throughout the essay help you to clearly illustrate your point. Nice job!
- 01/02/2003
- 20:25:50
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
I liked how you were able to summarize the book so aptly. Many others would have found it hard to condense a book into this size.
- 01/02/2003
- 19:56:32
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
The list is very detailed, an I liked how you used two different ways of presenting the information in the writing.
- 01/02/2003
- 19:34:00
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This clearly explains many things, and is very in depth. I totally agree with your point.
- 01/02/2003
- 18:17:57
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.