This paper is a 'hot topic' and controversial issue in the news media. The views and content are excellent.
- 10/02/2003
- 09:55:13
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I agree with the thought that people are responsible for the injustices they unknowingly participate in and they should simply not make the world any worse. The world would be a better place
- 10/02/2003
- 09:52:23
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Paper needs better structure. The content is good, but a needs to have better paragraph structuring with a thesis, main points, summary, conclusion. Just needs reorganizing and a little fixing up.
- 08/02/2003
- 21:15:21
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Write a conclusion to summarize the content
- 03/02/2003
- 21:00:53
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.