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Book Review: Sun Tzu's Art of War
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Book Review: The Lesser Evil by Michael Ignatieff
- 2350 words (9 pages)
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Battle of Algiers: Reaction
- 1491 words (6 pages)
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The Aleutian Campaign - A Detailed Account of the Alaskan North Pacific Theater.
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Thoreau as a Model for "Bartleby, the Scrivener" (Melville)
- 494 words (2 pages)
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Zionism Between 1894-1918
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Mohammad - religious and historical figure
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Tanzimat Reform - A Serious Attempt?
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Roman Polanski - Auteur Comparative Analysis
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Comments List

Quality of writing.
I understand this is a 12th grade paper, that being said, I don't think this a good essay. The writing tends to jump around and there are a few errors (word usage, tense, grammar).Is this a response to chapter three or the entire book? At any rate the author is not stated.TO THE SUBMITTER: Please don't take my comments personally. I'll admit when I was in high school my writing was not the best. Higher education will do you wonders!
- 08/03/2010
- 22:06:42
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Questionable Sources
Much of the evidence is taken from a 2001 FOX special or was in response to the tv program. The quality of the writing is alright, but I do not see who could use this essay for much of anything.
- 08/03/2010
- 21:54:11
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.