this is good a very easy read and makes a good point also kinda humorous too in parts
- 30/07/2003
- 21:46:45
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
refreshing something that can be said for america that is positive
- 30/07/2003
- 21:35:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is a great essay it flows very nicely and is an interesting read.
- 24/07/2003
- 21:01:25
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
loved it
- 24/07/2003
- 21:00:10
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
great start but what makes americans different from any other country with people that hold the same traits and also it seems that most of the traits that you listed are human traits that everyone around the world couseld posess
- 16/05/2003
- 02:33:23
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This essay really builds a mental picture with much ease
- 16/05/2003
- 02:30:26
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this is not a great essay on garcia
- 18/04/2003
- 19:15:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
makes a point ot voice own opinion on this subject. if you expanded this paper you could have an awesome reasearch paper. this is a great starting point to expand on.
- 18/04/2003
- 19:12:15
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this is a very touchy subject and needs evidence to support your opinions a great start to a very indepth paper.
- 18/04/2003
- 19:04:51
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this seems to be a great essay. you have a balance between all aspects of this essay. Way to go
- 16/02/2003
- 20:18:21
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
this essay rocks you have all the needed information to support your opinion. this is just awesome!!!!
- 14/02/2003
- 00:18:32
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This is a very insightful essay. I really enjoyed it.
- 14/02/2003
- 00:02:13
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
times are changing and if you don't like it move to a hut in the middle of somewhere that life exists for only you
- 13/02/2003
- 23:16:20
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
you have a strong opinion and make some harsh statments and need evidence to back these opinions up.
- 13/02/2003
- 23:06:25
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is good. It seems like you took the time to analize what this story meant to you
- 11/02/2003
- 22:20:33
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
you have a great message that you are trying to convey. But it could use a little tweeking of solid examples to make it even better
- 11/02/2003
- 17:51:57
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a great essay it looks at marriage from a very objective feminist view point.
- 07/02/2003
- 08:14:08
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
proofreading this essay could help it improve. Watching sentence structure and grammatical errors, this has the potential to become a great essay.
- 07/02/2003
- 03:17:11
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This could be a started point to expand for an essay.
- 07/02/2003
- 02:43:12
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I think that this essay is really very good. It uses great examples and builds a great mental picture.
- 07/02/2003
- 02:36:50
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
To rate this essay is very hard, the essay is very repetitive. This essay could definitely use a tweek of more imagination
- 07/02/2003
- 02:34:26
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.