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  • Animal Treatment

    Most zoos treat animals with respect and care for them like their own children. Each caretaker looks at their designated animal as a child/member of their family. On the other hand others and bad areas or caretakers with troubles em pasts would treat animals with cruelty and heartlessness. These people should be jailed for animal abuse or closely monitored by groups such as the ASPCA.This essay is well written and has some valid arguments. Good Job!
    • 12/12/2009
    • 16:58:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • 1st Amendment

    To me the first amendment is the most crucial and lays the foundation for the others. I agree with this being one of your three choices because without ideas the world would not be able to progress and all advancements would be at a standstill. Self-expressions would not exist without this amendment and it is very important that everyone is different and has different ideas and opinions about the world, how to dress, or do any other thing.
    • 12/12/2009
    • 16:53:53
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Essay

    I love all the wonderful examples in your essay. I learned a lot about the prevention of acid rain and can relate what I learned here to what I learned en my environmental course I am currently taking. I am currently trying to think of a cure for acid rain myself with no result so far, but this has made me think differently. Thank you, and good job!
    • 12/12/2009
    • 16:40:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.