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Lactobacillus Acidophilus - why lactobacillus is a "good" bacteria and how it is used to help your body and prevent other diseases.
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Frida Kahlo
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Good 10th grade essay.
This is a great essay, esspecially for a 10th grader, but it shows amatuerism when you use such phrases like "in the first section of this essay" and "the last but not least section of this essay" can be substituted for a phrase like "First of all" and "lastly I would like to discuss" would help it sound more on a high school level.- 11/02/2003
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