very informative and well written!gives good information, but not overloaded!!
- 27/10/2004
- 12:28:02
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
First off I totally agree with you here.I like your essay, because you didn't just state your opinion, you backed yourself up with proof..Good Job!!!
- 17/07/2004
- 12:42:35
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
very interesting topic to pick!
- 09/06/2004
- 12:07:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very good.. Love the title, it attracks attention!!
- 09/06/2004
- 12:00:01
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
you know though some teachers require a lot of sources. In college most of teachers say a min. of 5 sources, one teacher wanted 10 sources. I got a higher grade on one paper due to the fact that I had so many sources, the teacher told the class that as most people had just the min of 3...
- 08/06/2004
- 15:42:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
ahhh the figures didn't send like they were suppose to..If your interested in seeing the figures they can be seen at the website by Judy A. Brown above..
- 08/06/2004
- 09:11:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well I know there is a lot of sources on this one, but the teacher required us to have at least 10 sources
- 02/05/2004
- 11:28:18
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well you have good information it seems like it was just thrown together. I would try to see if you could get a thesis into your beginning paragraph
- 25/01/2004
- 11:11:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
My philosophy class was just talking about this cave analogy. Your paper gives good understanding of the topic. I like the way you kept the paper to the point and concise!good job!!
- 25/01/2004
- 11:10:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really like your paper, it is really good. It looks like you did a lot of research and yet it has a lot of good ideas!
- 25/01/2004
- 11:07:45
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Good Job, Well written and well informed
- 22/12/2003
- 11:08:20
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Your paper is well done, I guess it is just kind of confusing because of the spacing...Did you copy and paste from like a word document? Or did you mean for the writing to be like that sort of like a poem?
- 22/12/2003
- 11:00:27
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
You explained ABS better than the driving instructors I have had..Good job!!
- 21/12/2003
- 12:05:33
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Well Done and very informative.. Well written and gives great explaination as to what the French government is really like..Also gives great examples as to what goes on in government.
- 21/12/2003
- 12:02:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well these two articles make for a good topic the essay feels as though it is just a summary of the two articles and there is no commentary from the author. What are your feelings on this? Do you have any experience with this type of action in the workplace? Add your involvement, maybe explain in a secondary manner why you wrote the paper. Just ideas, overall the articles make for an interesting topic.
- 21/12/2003
- 11:57:57
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
While you make some good points about race relations in your paper, I am left with some confusion as to what you meant to explain his life or his convictions? Also there are quite a few grammar mistakes that I caught. It also seems as though you talk about one thing and then talk about something else, and then jump back to the first subject. It kind of leaves me confused.
- 21/12/2003
- 11:54:59
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
WOW, what a interesting study to do. It seemed as thought you were well prepared and did a great job.
- 21/12/2003
- 11:43:58
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I think that in regards to talking about Chernobyl you were very vague. It was more on how you hated doing research on the topic. Your paper leaves the reader in a confused state. Also if this was to be a term paper/research paper you might want to leave out all the I did, I wanted, I think...Just a suggestion though.
- 21/12/2003
- 11:37:43
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
WOW, great paper and well done! Very informative. Well written!
- 21/12/2003
- 11:30:06
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Well done!! I like your information and the way you present it.
- 21/12/2003
- 11:27:23
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
In most cases, essays that go over a certain amount of words getting boring after a while, but yours keeps the reader well informed and makes for a well-defined topic. Well the spacing on the essay makes reading somewhat confusing, your writing and wording makes for interesting reading..Good Job!
- 21/12/2003
- 11:23:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
While your essay is well done, you kind of leave some things out when explaining haunted houses..
- 19/12/2003
- 11:01:19
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Wow, what an interesting essay...the perspective of a weed is awesome!!!
- 18/12/2003
- 14:54:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Next time maybe place "" around such items as "When he (Claudius) needs what you have gleaned, it is but squeezing you and, sponge, you shall be dry again," (pg 98, 20). You use a lot of (), not that that is bad it just gets a little confusing and by adding "" it is eaiser to understand.I love your line in which you mentionRosencrantz and Guildenstern soak up all the kings favors, only to become dry again after they mop up the King's mess.. That is a good analogy of what so called friends are....Although I disagree with you and believe that Hamlet was crazy you make some good pts, although I think you need to add more of your own opinion..All in all good essay!!! :)
- 18/12/2003
- 13:24:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Good Essay...Good Thesis to start with and also good transition words to continue paper with...Was a little confused as to what you quoted as I did not see "" around sentences that were followed by (source)..Also didn't see a full source name at the end of the paper, might be helpful for someone who is looking for sources on this President.
- 18/12/2003
- 13:19:14
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
WONDERFUL!!!
- 18/12/2003
- 12:35:22
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I just wrote a paper for college american government on why I feel the death penalty is wrong...Well your essay is more just a historic case of the death penalty,"I express doubts about the death penalty after hearing information about the costs of the death penalty. "What info have you heard? Explain"The Special Rapporteur is mandated by the U.N. Commission for Human Rights to address instances of executions that violate international standards regarding human rights and the right to life."Explain what this means to death penalty countries that violate human rights..Maybe discuss some of the methods of death such as electric chair, hanging, shooting, gas chamber, lethal injection and how they historically began..A good reference is http://www.deathpenaltyinfo.org/Lastly discuss the cases you mention such as Gregg vs. Georgia and Stanford v. Kentucky..What happened in this cases?Lastly since you mention Amnesty International why not mention the death penalty in other countries a bit...Just an ideas...
- 18/12/2003
- 12:31:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good Job, greatly informed on Coca Cola now... I wanna buy the world a coke now,
- 18/12/2003
- 12:21:16
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I would like to congratulate you on a well written essay... This paper really explains fact and your opinion in a good combo..I was a little confused as to what was quoted though... Not sure where the "" should have been..All in all, good job, well written!!!
- 18/12/2003
- 12:14:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Not to be rude, but your paper sounds a little vague...as it does not really state your opinion... maybe mention the three windows as a symbolic reference to the holy trinty.... Not sure if you needed a thesis in this paper, but if so it was somewhat difficult to find, only in my opinion though...Also did you use any sources to compound this information?
- 18/12/2003
- 12:10:17
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very Well done.. Great length and to the point....Would recommend adding maybe a little bit to your conclusion, but overall well done
- 18/12/2003
- 12:03:59
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your first paragraph is well done and contains a lot of information that is crucial to your paper, but maybe by taking a few sentences out, you could add another paragraph and make your first paragraph along with your thesis a little clearer.These sentences here could make up a whole new paragraph with maybe one or two additional sentences.."In this state of devastation, both the Soviet Union and the United States reached out to lend a hand to help economical revival in Western Europe. Since communism was firmly rebuffed in Western Europe, and the Soviet Union was a communist country, the United States' aid was accepted to help Western Europe begin its long period of economic revival. "
- 17/12/2003
- 23:08:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Wow....Good information and statement was well argued....
- 17/12/2003
- 22:36:29
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.