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    This paper is great! However trying not to use passive voice would make your writing a bit stronger. For example: instead of "it has become a very difficult task for the management team and the various members of its support staff to effectively run and maintain the hospital", try getting rid of "it": "effectively running and maintaining the hospital has become a very difficult task for the management team and the various members of its support staff"
    • 27/02/2003
    • 10:19:20
    • Score: 21 out of 21 people found this comment useful.