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Contrasting Conflict in Things Fall Apart and Heart of Darkness
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"Charity in the US" A paper discussing current trends of philanthropy in America and also the risks and scams involved in giving
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"Irony in Pride and Predjudice" A discussion of Jane Austin's use of irony as a literary tool with specific examples from chapters 53-61
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An overview of the genetic disease Cystic Fibrosis
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This paper is great! However trying not to use passive voice would make your writing a bit stronger. For example: instead of "it has become a very difficult task for the management team and the various members of its support staff to effectively run and maintain the hospital", try getting rid of "it": "effectively running and maintaining the hospital has become a very difficult task for the management team and the various members of its support staff"- 27/02/2003
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