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    Though your thesis is very strong, it is not supported in your paper. In your thesis statement you refer to the satire that is utilized by Vonnegut to convey his theme, yet your paper makes little reference to this satire. Overall well written, but contains to much summarization and not enough commentary.
    • 06/03/2003
    • 19:47:45
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.