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  • Wonderful

    A very good essay but it seemed to lose its very mature style of writing at points. Also, a very well thought out analysis of The Hobbit
    • 18/05/2003
    • 13:38:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    On the whole a good essay. Good content and style of writing, but perhaps you could have condensed it a little more. An excellent and very insightful topic.
    • 08/04/2003
    • 05:20:53
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Insightful

    A good pleasing essay. Well written and goos structure. Do try to avoid such a formal register when writing for a younger audience. On the whole an interesting essay with great information.
    • 25/03/2003
    • 13:21:36
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Insightful

    A good and very interesting essay and the first of its kind I have ever encountered! On the whole a good essay and nicely written.
    • 25/03/2003
    • 13:13:48
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good

    A very good, well structured and well thaught out essay. Good Facts and and excellent style of writing. A job very well done but in future perhaps try to condense it a little more.
    • 25/03/2003
    • 13:08:16
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Excellent Content!

    A good essay but be careful of generalisations and vague statements. Very good content. Try to avoid repetition and try to keep paragraph lengths the same throughout. On the whole... a good, informative essay.
    • 24/03/2003
    • 08:16:08
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.