A very good essay but it seemed to lose its very mature style of writing at points. Also, a very well thought out analysis of The Hobbit
- 18/05/2003
- 13:38:01
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
On the whole a good essay. Good content and style of writing, but perhaps you could have condensed it a little more. An excellent and very insightful topic.
- 08/04/2003
- 05:20:53
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
A good pleasing essay. Well written and goos structure. Do try to avoid such a formal register when writing for a younger audience. On the whole an interesting essay with great information.
- 25/03/2003
- 13:21:36
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A good and very interesting essay and the first of its kind I have ever encountered! On the whole a good essay and nicely written.
- 25/03/2003
- 13:13:48
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A very good, well structured and well thaught out essay. Good Facts and and excellent style of writing. A job very well done but in future perhaps try to condense it a little more.
- 25/03/2003
- 13:08:16
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A good essay but be careful of generalisations and vague statements. Very good content. Try to avoid repetition and try to keep paragraph lengths the same throughout. On the whole... a good, informative essay.
- 24/03/2003
- 08:16:08
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.