This essay follows the unfolding of the story and reads into it well. Try to use more quotes to make your argument stronger.
- 25/11/2003
- 03:34:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a very good analysis of Okonkwo's behaviour and indeed reads deep into his inner and sometimes cowardly feelings of becomeing his own father. Good work!
- 25/11/2003
- 03:31:18
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
In future try to include more qoutes and refer to analytical techniques more.
- 25/11/2003
- 03:24:47
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This essay is rather good. However slight improvments could make it better: no quotes in introduction. Topic sentences should be more focused. Try to make overall essay more analytical by refering to literal techniques mroe often. Overall good effort!
- 25/11/2003
- 03:18:05
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
very good and descriptive! well done
- 11/05/2003
- 02:01:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
good essay. to improve: less spelling mistakes as well as addition of quotes.
- 19/03/2003
- 02:49:24
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
informative essay, well summerized plot. more anlysis should be added though for a better grade.
- 18/03/2003
- 05:19:07
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Full of relavent information and explanation of the plot, as well as good theme and character discription. More analysis will give this essay a much higher grade.
- 18/03/2003
- 05:14:05
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This essay has great potential as the idea is interesting and up to date. However, i think it could be expanded with much more detail and views.
- 16/03/2003
- 02:02:39
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.