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  • Ethics

    Well written and great interpetation of different beliefs in the growth of ethics of one.
    • 17/08/2003
    • 16:51:32
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Great essay

    I really enjoyed your essay. Your writing is a pleasure to read.
    • 06/01/2003
    • 03:06:51
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • 10th Grade?

    This is a super paper written at the 10th grade level. Too bad we don't see more of this kind of work.
    • 06/01/2003
    • 03:00:41
    • Score: 21 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • One more thing.

    I agree...I didn't notice that I had lost the paragraph indents when I pasted it over. Guess I will pay closer attention next time.
    • 05/01/2003
    • 23:39:20
    • Score: 12 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • Comment

    Good paper with lots of facts. I am a LAN guy myself. Can't live without those Gig-a-minute downloads.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 23:56:33
    • Score: 14 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
  • Comment

    Good essay. I get to travel to Japan often and love the people and culture.If you really look in to the fiscal policies leading up to the 1997 event, you will notice a lot of similarities to mistakes made by US fiscal policy makers in our earlier days.Just ones opinion. Good work.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 23:51:56
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Comments

    It is sometimes better to get your opinion in by writing in the third person. That way people do not automatically take the offensive.The fact is nobody wants to hear "I think" but are more responsive to "the author thinks".....just a suggestion.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 13:49:55
    • Score: 18 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
  • Cover it

    Very informative. Always have good information to give us.Good job.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 02:59:53
    • Score: 14 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
  • WP vs. DP

    Big point with little words. Great job.I use MS Word and the Adobe publishing Suite so I know just where you are coming from.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 02:57:37
    • Score: 20 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • English

    You are very good at writing the short essay.You are very descriptive with little words.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 02:55:18
    • Score: 17 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
  • Short but good

    Very nice piece of work.Very easy to read.To the point and very precise.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 02:53:14
    • Score: 21 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
  • Driving

    Was a good read. Might want to give it a second set of eyes to evaluate the paragraph structure.Good job.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 02:50:59
    • Score: 24 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
  • Lord of the Flies

    Good solid paper. Was a good read. Might want to give it a second set of eyes to catch those spelling or grammer gremlins.
    • 23/12/2002
    • 02:48:23
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good paper

    You have taken the time to provide good sources. Your argument was not as broad as maybe it could have been. The paper flowed well and was an easy read.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 20:50:16
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Homeschool or not to Homeschool

    As an educated parent who has homeschooled his children for several years....I can relate first hand to this article.Very educated point and very well researched.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 20:11:08
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Real or Reproduction

    Great representation in this writing. It is one thing to see something wonderful on a screen and then it is something awesome to sit here and see the beauty in person.Well done.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 20:06:21
    • Score: 44 out of 47 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done.

    Good paper back by creditable facts. Gets to the oint without a lot of filler.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 16:19:09
    • Score: 35 out of 41 people found this comment useful.
  • Very interesting

    Very short but to the point and very well done. You write as if you enjoy it.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 16:16:46
    • Score: 35 out of 40 people found this comment useful.
  • Information is a good thing.

    This is a very informative paper. Good job. Maybe a more robust conclusion.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 16:12:15
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Solid paper.

    Good solid paper. Just a few areas that need attention, but over all, great job.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 16:01:28
    • Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • "outside of bible proof"

    Very well written "but" being a person of faith and trying to write an argumentative paper can be difficult.AoE was correct in stating that you should have added more "outside of the bible" proof instead of simply quoting scripture.As a person of many faiths myself....I can say that people tend to take you more seriously if you can provide sources or proof from non biased entities.Keep up the good work.
    • 22/12/2002
    • 08:06:47
    • Score: 8 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Morale; The strongest weapon in war

    This was a very well written and researched essay. Being a senior noncommissioned officer in the Army, I can tell you this is the absolute truth. This author used actual historical events that are still used in the military today to instill morale in the troops. Great job.
    • 10/04/2002
    • 06:12:58
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.