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  • Decent Essay ...

    It was a decent and informational essay, however you should work on improving it's grammar.
    • 19/11/2006
    • 15:17:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Quite good ...

    Great educational essay, but for easier reading I advise breaking it into more paragraphs.
    • 08/11/2006
    • 15:23:48
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • : )

    Very good and full of information.
    • 05/09/2006
    • 13:44:52
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.