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  • "Much Ado About Nothing" Movie Review

    You really need to break up the paragraphs. They are extremely long and tedious to read.
    • 29/01/2006
    • 12:26:08
    • Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Abuse, Dependence and Addiction.

    You really need another paragraph at the end closing your thoughts and summarizing or recaping what you wrote.
    • 29/01/2006
    • 12:22:33
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Free will in "Lord of the Flies"

    You might want to consider being a little more concise and reduce your paragraph and sentences lenght. It gets really tiring to read.
    • 10/01/2006
    • 14:14:08
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Dissarmament Saga.

    I like to way you write. Clear and concise.
    • 10/01/2006
    • 14:11:57
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Reason and God.

    It would ahve been nice if the bibliography was there.
    • 10/01/2006
    • 14:09:46
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Jack Welch- Human Resource Leader.

    Great Essay. You were able to bring the subject to life and keep it interesting.
    • 01/12/2005
    • 23:38:49
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • The Nuclear Club : Ethics Of Nuclear Proliferation.

    Well writen, however, some of the paragraphs are awfully long and there is no transition sentences.The subject is interesting though.
    • 27/11/2005
    • 20:46:45
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good information.

    You have great information in here; however it is very poorly written and some of the information is duplicated in different portions of the essay.
    • 08/10/2005
    • 12:42:36
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • I just did the research on this

    and it is interesting how close we actually have to study other country's business process and ethicsGood
    • 11/08/2005
    • 21:36:22
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • This is a duplicate essay

    this is a duplicate essay
    • 11/08/2005
    • 21:23:01
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • The nature/nurture controversy

    The information is interesting; however, there are too many single sentence paragraphs. It is strange that you got a 90% on a college level essay.
    • 12/06/2005
    • 14:10:14
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Genetics/Heredity

    Good information; however, the essay would read much better if you move paragraphs around to follow some type of sequence. Also , try to avoid single sentence paragraphs.
    • 12/06/2005
    • 14:04:21
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • This is a fraud a complete fraud

    This essay was copied from http://members.tripod.com/~dlane5/die1.html writen by Brian Walsh published by MSAC Philosophy Group
    • 10/05/2005
    • 12:33:41
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good info but....

    some of the sentences were run-ons and were is the conclusion?
    • 28/12/2004
    • 11:10:39
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Essay

    Very insightful essay and easy to read.
    • 28/12/2004
    • 11:08:19
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree with you 100%

    what can we do though, we will be there someday. Watch out world, baby boomers approaching senility on the roads. That is a wonderful bumper sticker.
    • 28/12/2004
    • 09:32:59
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Hiring unqualified people, work analysis

    A few suggestions: Do not use contractions on an essay; it is one of the basic rules in English writing. The use of "I" is assumed thus not required. The reader knows it is your opinion thus the "I" is not necessary. You also mention, "They should also ask question to see if the person wants the job being offered or does he/she just needs a jobs desperately." This should be used in the body of the text not in the conclusion paragraph and some ideas or examples of the questions might help.For some basic writting rules http://weather.nmsu.edu/Teaching_Material/soil501/writrul.html;for some basic business writting rules http://www.hut.fi/~rvilmi/LangHelp/Writing/
    • 30/11/2004
    • 09:30:10
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • White collar workers,and class stratification

    Not a bad paper. Good information and nice essay structure. Spelling and grammar need some work though.
    • 30/11/2004
    • 09:09:15
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • The Earth's Atmosphere

    Not sure where you got your information, howerver the earth is quite older than 4.5 million years old. They have found fossils older than that in Africa resently. I am pretty sure your instructor would have got that info thus not rating you with a 4.0. Perhaps 4.6 billion years. Check this gov site. http://www.newton.dep.anl.gov/askasci/gen99/gen99168.htm
    • 26/11/2004
    • 10:55:31
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Argentina

    There are several good things about Argentina. It is a beautifull country, beautifull people. They treat visitors very well and they are proud of their heritage. Brasil currently have and has hed previously very similar issues as most of the countries in South America. In a way I think it is called growing pains of a nation.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 13:44:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Activities

    Watch your verb tense. You are going allover the place.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 13:33:55
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • To what extent are judges in the Court of Appeal and House of Lords free to depart from previous decisions and practice?

    That is why they say it is in the discretion of the judge/court. Law is a beautiful thing
    • 03/11/2004
    • 13:28:34
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Critique of the state of the web as a media for the conduct of social relations

    Interesting information. Eye opener actually.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 12:56:16
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Satire: Script of the TV series 'CNNNN'

    Funny paper, great imagination
    • 03/11/2004
    • 12:34:52
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good things never last

    funny. Good and funny
    • 03/11/2004
    • 12:31:59
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Startegic Human Resources Management

    Great paer, however the conclusion is a bit weak. Perhaps from the perspective that I am biased about one sentence paragraphs.
    • 02/11/2004
    • 12:40:12
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Downsizing : A Essay on the negative effects of downsizing on employess

    Good essay content. Check your spelling though, there are some words misspelled and quite a bit of passive sentences.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 13:18:25
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Compare and contrast Brecht and Stanislavski notions of acting and the role of the actor in the theatre

    Good essay, however it would have been nice to try and incorporate, some of the examples and citations within longer paragraphs. There are several 1-paragraph sentences in this essay, making the thoughts somewhat incomplete.
    • 10/08/2004
    • 13:12:09
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Chief Corporate Positions

    Good paper. however too many 1 sentece paragraphs, looks like the though is half done. A paragraph should have more than one sentence, it should concist of assertion, reasones for the assertion and data supporting that assertion.
    • 19/06/2004
    • 21:30:17
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • COLLEGE STUDENTS WHO BINGE DRINK

    Great paper. Well research. Good job.
    • 19/06/2004
    • 21:26:07
    • Score: 24 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
  • Death stalks a continent: The effects of aids in Africa and it's people.

    very good paper, very informnative
    • 29/05/2004
    • 23:39:35
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • This is a fraud and unethical way to get in

    This is a copy of an article "Information Ethics: On the Philosophical Foundation of Computer Ethics" written and posted by "Luciano Floridi" even to quote by Virginia Woolf is copies from the cite. Good grief this is pathetic.
    • 09/04/2004
    • 15:37:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • The Day I Walked Out of McDonald's

    Great paper. I actually could see it in my mind the pictures as I was reading the paper.
    • 09/04/2004
    • 11:18:14
    • Score: 21 out of 24 people found this comment useful.
  • Ethics and the Internet

    Good paper, however it would have more credibility if some resources were cited.
    • 09/04/2004
    • 11:04:02
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Schizophrenia

    Good paper, however it would be of greater impact and information more credible if references were used and some research was included.
    • 07/04/2004
    • 14:55:39
    • Score: 13 out of 15 people found this comment useful.
  • Explain roots, stems and leaves in plants

    good info. good reading flow.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 14:59:53
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Acid Rain

    wow, very well writen. An eye opener
    • 02/04/2004
    • 14:53:20
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • Anti-dumping - the controversy

    Nice info but formating would help the readability.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 14:42:33
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • National Waiting List

    Interesting info, however some of the sentences make no sense. For instance ... "If this is able to be done then every United State's citizen will have a better chance for life." Might be better is rephrased. "The number of names being added to the National Waiting List is increasing at a staggering rate. Non-resident organ recipients are further increasing the rate on the waiting list. Non-resident aliens should be placed on a different list as to give priority to United States citizens." This being just a suggestion from a literary standpoint, as I totally disagree with the statement made. From my perspective the statement is a total disregard to the human race giving the selection criteria to race.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 14:16:56
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Marketing plan

    The information is interesting but some of the paragraphs are very long and difficult to follow. You might want to revise some of the longer paragraphs and try to break the information.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 14:00:49
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Internet Regulation, Computer, Internet, Privacy

    very good information.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 13:53:24
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Outward Action versus Inward Meditation

    Wow love the way you write. Great job.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 13:31:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Child Prostitution and Sexual Abuse: A Short History

    lots of great information. Check youline spacing on certain paragraphs. The sentences are broken in the middle and moved to next line.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 13:09:31
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • The Influence of Chinese Culture on Buddhism

    It is a very information paper, however consider revising 1 sentence paragraphs and double check spelling.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 12:53:43
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Industrial revolution

    you might want to cite where you got your information as some of the information provided could not be verified or confirmed.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 12:51:58
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • The representation of homosexuals in the media

    Good topic and good content, however the paper is not fluid, it is very choppy and difficult to follow. Some transitional sentences would improve the quality of the paper. In addition, spelling should be checked for instance: "I have chose the theme" s/b "I chose the theme" or I have selected the theme" or "I have chosen the theme"
    • 28/03/2004
    • 13:27:52
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Nothing short of war could have any effect on the Russian system of government." How accurate is this view of the Tsarist system of government from 1800 to 1917?

    On a paper, the "I" should be implied not stated. This could be a much better paper if the "I's" were removed. Also removing sentences, which ends with prepositions, would help the sentence structure and readability.
    • 28/03/2004
    • 12:58:46
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Critical Analysis of 'The Handmaid's Tale' by Margaret Atwood

    Very well written essay, however a conclusion paragraph restating the main points of the paper would be enhance the quality of the paper.
    • 28/03/2004
    • 12:37:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.