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"Catcher in the rye" by J.D. Salinger.
- 495 words (2 pages)
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Why i write
its good- 23/11/2003
- 19:16:56
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The ameriacn drean and how it affects the lennie
try not to use lennies name so much and dont use the same word over and over again in the same paragraph. Eample paragraph 3 the word love is used way to much istaed say compasion. when you use a word excessivley it sound like your saying the same thing over again.- 23/11/2003
- 19:04:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.