Good Job. you provided good information. This is a really good persuasive essay.
- 23/05/2003
- 20:52:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It was a really good essay. you did a good job in finding pros and cons for both Breastfeeding and Formula Feeding. NICE WORK.
- 24/04/2003
- 21:27:47
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This paper was pretty good. My suggestion is that get rid of the use of "I" in the paper. A paper should always be in the third person not in the first person.
- 23/04/2003
- 23:36:06
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
really really good essay
- 23/04/2003
- 23:27:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Really good essay. If I was doing a project on Dangers of Water Pollution, I would definetly cite this essay
- 21/04/2003
- 11:33:30
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.