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  • Confused

    This "essay" is just an answer to many questions which we do not know what they were. They would be helpful. Also it is not in an essay format, just in the format of answers to a few questions that would be specific to a certain assignment, not an entire group.
    • 04/04/2004
    • 18:41:26
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Needs statistics

    This was an essay on a great topic, but the arguments do not seem to be as well formulated as possible. It definetely needs more statistics and more of a backbone. If you have a chance check out the essay that I have writte on the legalization of specific drugs for an easier to follow outline.
    • 04/04/2004
    • 18:37:54
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Well written

    That was a well written essay, perfectly planned and perfect execution. Great job.
    • 04/04/2004
    • 18:34:08
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Great information

    This was a very informative essay, and it wasnt any useless information. It was a nice summary of the West Nile Virus.
    • 04/04/2004
    • 18:30:52
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    This is a good essay, but something is wrong with the format. There are pars in there and many numbers that may be resolution. I am not sure exactly. The essay is great and has great content, good job.
    • 05/05/2003
    • 06:05:59
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Great essay

    I was a bit confused about stem cells before I read this, but it really cleared up a lot of my concerns. Great essay, just watch the all caps. That was a great essay, thanks.
    • 03/05/2003
    • 16:33:22
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Good

    This is a very good basic analysis of the symbolism in the Scarlet Letter. You use the major examples of this from the work. Great paper.
    • 03/05/2003
    • 08:56:58
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This essay has very good information about drugs. It is backed up by statistics, a very good essay. This brings up the issues of different names of drugs also, and that will help people realize not only to think of the most common name as the drug but for other names too.
    • 02/05/2003
    • 15:41:16
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • More statistics

    you really need more statistics backing your essay up. Opinion is a great part but facts need to back up opinions. It is a great topic, just needs a little help.
    • 01/05/2003
    • 21:40:56
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Point

    There are many true parts to this. A majority of my teachers that are males are coaches. Some coaches are great teachers, but some are just good at coaching and need the teaching spot to coach. There are many changes in roles going on, a good essay for modern times.
    • 01/05/2003
    • 21:38:05
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Essay

    This is a very good essay. It is written in a good format for statistics. It will help many people write a paper on their topic. It has many good facts. Very good in stating many possibilities.
    • 01/05/2003
    • 21:32:29
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • More Info

    This essay has a very good introduction, but more facts and supporting information is really needed. It is important that you have statistics on depression and descision making, a good introduction but the body of the essay really needs to be expanded.
    • 01/05/2003
    • 08:56:28
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.