Even though I am younger than you, I can even say this report was horrible. For one it was too short and hardly had any factual information about him. Second, It had absolutely no transitions and the beginning and conclusion stunk. And third, it was so black and white, ink and paper, (in this case, lines and pixels) very monotonous and bland. Your report/essay doesn't even come near to painting the real picture of the dark and dreary life and writing of Edgar Allen Poe. There also appears to be no organized order, no chronilogical no nothing. No wonder you didn't post the grade you received for this.
- 29/04/2003
- 21:52:23
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