this is a very good and detailed essay, however, you missed a good introduction and conclusive lines. your introduction is very very average, and i think you've known that already. your conclusion though, in my opinion, is awful. it is a hard end for a good essay. it do not restate the main points, and do not conclude the idea and maybe the purpose of the poem. while it may be sufficient for most poem reader, i myself find it difficult to understand why the author decides to write this poem, and why do you like or dislike it. compare this with your other essay.
- 20/07/2004
- 08:24:13
- Score: 21 out of 44 people found this comment useful.
i'm not really a poem reader but this intepretation is actually very-very good. you make it very easy for most of us to understand what you're actually talking about and still keeping a good track on the details. well done.
- 20/07/2004
- 07:58:36
- Score: 47 out of 53 people found this comment useful.
wow, as a student that live in Indonesia for more than 15 years now i'm pretty imppressed with your essay! it is very clear, well detailed, and referenced. and for the sentence that claims the dutch made the indonesians work hard with less pay, actually there was a time where they made the indonesians work hard with no pay! thank you for this very good essay.
- 20/07/2004
- 07:56:35
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a very good essay that assists most of the readers with good details and examples, but i think you'll need references and quotes to support you sentences.
- 19/07/2004
- 07:59:12
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is one of the best essay there is! where anyone just wrote their scrambled their essay, you order them with subtitles... good job!
- 11/08/2003
- 02:19:46
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i have read many essays in this site and don't find many as good as this one (in term of quality). this essay is simple, marvelous, and provide good facts. really, really worth to read.
- 04/05/2003
- 02:53:45
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
please, don't write it all caps. it's a good essay, and don't let formatting makes it down.
- 03/05/2003
- 08:57:11
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
wonderful essay, nicely written.
- 03/05/2003
- 00:03:13
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Its just too short. Indonesia is a big country, and you can't explain one big island in just a paragraph.
- 02/05/2003
- 23:53:01
- Score: 5 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
we really need some more fact. your writing are only based on opinion, which is different for each point of view. you should enter more statistic, that peeps DO support your opinion.i agreed with Jenni854830, maybe we have a different point of view (or at least jenni showed us some evidence).
- 02/05/2003
- 23:51:58
- Score: 35 out of 41 people found this comment useful.
okay, it is a nice essay, but you really need some more evidence or prove to support your opinion. some interview with your friends maybe?
- 02/05/2003
- 23:34:50
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
very well written, and completed with thousands of evidence and prooves makes this long writing worth to read.
- 01/05/2003
- 21:08:16
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
excellent essay, well written.
- 01/05/2003
- 20:57:57
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
nice one, although its short it shows all of the main point. this one should went off to bush's office right away ^_^
- 30/04/2003
- 10:45:01
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
wonderful, very well written. this essay shows me a very high standart of your quality writing. keep up the good work!btw: i love how you quote the sources.
- 30/04/2003
- 10:39:56
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
simple, complete, and brilliant! very nice one. keep up the good work!
- 30/04/2003
- 10:37:40
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
excelent! very well written, and i absolutely love the intro.
- 29/04/2003
- 09:57:59
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
A very good essay and introduction. But I think it need a bit more visualisation, like pictures. Nice one though, although if you describe it with more detail it will be better.
- 29/04/2003
- 09:49:00
- Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.