My vietnam speech was a small % SPEECH that didn't require handing in. This was written for English Lit, big difference.
- 08/05/2005
- 01:15:23
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You gotta anylise something more, these are great kepp it up. Two thumbs up.
- 22/09/2004
- 09:39:18
- Score: 22 out of 30 people found this comment useful.
Excellent referencing and heaps of info, I can't believe you only got %58 for it!
- 22/09/2004
- 09:33:44
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I'm trying to look at this objectively lol, it's a hard story to read.You constantly change point of view?from "If I was" hypothesizing that to "I've lost many cronies that way" which is in the past sense. You switch between these two throughout the piece, other than that, whatever :)
- 22/08/2004
- 05:13:50
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Well written, very nicely structured. Would clock up 100% in most teachers books I imagine :)
- 22/08/2004
- 04:26:06
- Score: 30 out of 33 people found this comment useful.
At last, somebody who actually quotes the material they write on! To often are essays written without quotes to backup evidence, excellent work.
- 22/08/2004
- 04:24:05
- Score: 38 out of 47 people found this comment useful.
wasn't the majority of cars produced by Volkswagon in Germany anyway? I highly doubt they would use vehicles from their capatalist enemies.
- 06/06/2004
- 21:50:29
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I like your take on God, great story.
- 03/06/2004
- 22:12:43
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Although happy and nice and wonderfull... You should realise these things will never come to be in our lifetimes or those of our children, but we can hope... as with what chicken said, you haven't addressed many issues and have managed to ask many more questions than answered, this would make a good question for a essay in some philosophy class tho!
- 11/11/2003
- 10:19:59
- Score: 10 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
Im an Aussie too so I can actually relate to these things, good points, well done.
- 25/05/2003
- 01:04:13
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.