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  • I agree

    Your essay is so completely true.I know a couple of people who are constantly putting themselves down, and whenever they do so about 30 people are replying saying: 'no, you know that isn't true!' etc, etcand it gets really annoying. Like when girls ask their boyfriends if they look fat in the pants their wearing, they expect the guy to be like 'oh no, you are the most beautiful girl ever..' blah blahAHHH! practically everyone i know does that.Anyway what I'm trying to say, quite poorly, is that you are so right.
    • 19/05/2003
    • 21:51:13
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  • Interesting...

    I think that you shouldn't make the generalization that the pro choice movement is just like supporting murder of humans. There are many sides to the pro-choice and pro-life movements and you shouldn't just group it all into two simple categories. The pro-choice movements does not always condone abortion, but feel that women should be able to have the option if circumstances do arise. No one knows what they would do for sure if they were put into a situation where there were pregnant with an unwanted child even though they think they might now, thats why it is important to have all the options necessary.So I guess overall what I'm trying to say is that the two sides of the issue aren't that simple, and when writing an essay, try to not generalize the issue into two groups, because most issues are more complicated than that.But overall your essay is well written.
    • 14/05/2003
    • 23:07:50
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Very informative

    I think it was very well written, however despite the fact that the issue itself is very controversial, your viewpoint needed to be.. It was a little difficult to see what your argument was
    • 14/05/2003
    • 22:55:57
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Great Poem

    It takes a lot of courage to put your poem out there for everyone to read, I know that I could never do it, so all I wanted to say was Good Job!The Poem is very well written and easy to relate to
    • 14/05/2003
    • 09:36:45
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • What a great movie...

    I remember thinking how powerful the film was when I first saw it, despite the fact that there aren't any actual German people playing Germans in the film, but hey what can you do. I really liked the message of the film. Anyways, I liked your review, since it did provide a little historical background, which is always good since there are way too many people who say things without researching, and it is highly irritating. I guess my one suggestion is.... make it longer next time, and talk more about the history of the time period, using the movie a couple ot times as a reference... I speak from experience... teachers enjoy historical significance more than the actual source! So yeah, good job... keep writing
    • 09/05/2003
    • 01:21:38
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.