Hmm...no one's gonna comment?
- 19/05/2003
- 15:19:35
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I'm in 7th grade, and I also had an essay asking for change in the Electoral College. You didn't address the fact that Bush barely campaigned in New York and California, where the majority of the people live in cities and probably voted for Gore. He won New York City by a landslide, so Bush had no chance. The one thing that saved Bush was Florida.That was just a suggestion. However, very nice essay. See what you think of mine - Republican Unfairness (problems with the Electoral College)
- 15/05/2003
- 23:36:42
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O...K, a little hard to follow, but for the most part pretty good. What did you get on this? Just wondering...I'm not saying it's bad; just wanted to know if this is what your assignment was or if you strayed off-topic.
- 12/05/2003
- 19:18:29
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Good job; I like how you described and supported the key points. You also refuted the opposing points well. Nice job overall.
- 12/05/2003
- 17:46:47
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Nice essay. I like the way you explained what Stalin did during the 'purge' and backed up all your opinions. Very good job overall.
- 12/05/2003
- 17:11:56
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Sorry, but I have to agree with the rest...just a bunch of facts; also, you could have used speel check.
- 12/05/2003
- 16:56:34
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Nice job man...I like how you incorporated your personal experiences in the essay. No major problems, only a couple grammatical errors. Very nicely done, could have been a bit longer tho. Good job! I give it a :)
- 12/05/2003
- 16:46:40
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
A great yet still concise biography on a truly great artist. Very nicely done, with great sentence structure and word choice.
- 11/05/2003
- 02:04:04
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.