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  • ?

    i didn't see how this was an essay. seemed more like an outline. a buch of information bundled up into categories. other than that, the language use was okay and the information was good.
    • 26/05/2003
    • 09:39:48
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good essay

    you used a good amount of vocabulary and esplained your topic well. it is a distinguished essay. the only fla i found was that you spelled recognized wrong in the beginning paragraph. you spelled it "recognised."
    • 26/05/2003
    • 09:35:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.