i like the comparison of the internet and socialism...even tho i do not agree with everything writen on this paper, it is written quite well so good job on that and keep up the good workim not really sure what the things at the end are for, but i will answer the 3 questions anways1. yes, it does it very well, a very good job with it2. yes they do, however, i would have included not just the legitiment things, i would also include the illigal imoral things ie: hacking, warez, cheating (ahem...lol)3. the paper does not necisarily need to be longer to say what u are trying to make us understand, it is to the point, and it really depends on how your teacher likes it
- 11/12/2003
- 00:29:08
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
u did a good job on this, short and to the point (i like the to the teacher section, lol)
- 13/08/2003
- 10:20:18
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
good work with this, keep it up
- 11/08/2003
- 12:26:50
- Score: 11 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
good points that you have stated....another contriversial issue for the women, not for me, lol
- 08/06/2003
- 05:08:19
- Score: 20 out of 25 people found this comment useful.
nice and informative, another great work of art....well not art i guess
- 08/06/2003
- 05:06:57
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
nice done short essay, very informative
- 08/06/2003
- 05:05:17
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
this is pretty good, not just average
- 08/06/2003
- 05:03:29
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
good job, i just found it weird that u labeled the different sections, as in "conclusion...etc.." was this made to be a essay? but anyways, its very informative and its pretty much great
- 08/06/2003
- 05:02:16
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
another brillian job done by u, i was just wondering, where do u get the time to do all this stuff?
- 08/06/2003
- 04:59:40
- Score: 29 out of 38 people found this comment useful.
this is good, but kinda vague (i think thats how u spell it), and as the other guy said u didnt metion worms, but either than that, great job
- 08/06/2003
- 04:57:42
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this is a great paper, keep up the good work!
- 08/06/2003
- 04:55:23
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
animal rights activist arent we?
- 08/06/2003
- 04:51:41
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
good job, very informative
- 08/06/2003
- 04:45:24
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
good job, the only thing i dont like is the ending, it could be a little stronger
- 08/06/2003
- 04:44:42
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
good job on this paper, its very informative
- 08/06/2003
- 04:43:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a well done paper....keep up the good work
- 03/06/2003
- 20:20:43
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
well done
- 03/06/2003
- 20:20:13
- Score: 1 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this is a little too short for me, but it delivers the facts
- 02/06/2003
- 22:13:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
as i said, this is an interesting paper
- 02/06/2003
- 22:12:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a good job for your level
- 02/06/2003
- 22:11:44
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
very informative paper, good job
- 02/06/2003
- 22:10:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
whats with the low scores, this is pretty good
- 02/06/2003
- 22:10:14
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
as he said (kinda) you did a good job
- 02/06/2003
- 22:09:28
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
good addon to your last one about this guy
- 02/06/2003
- 22:08:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is not a question for the writer of the paper, is for the guy who made the comment:what do you rate something bad and not give an explanation?
- 02/06/2003
- 22:08:06
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is not a question for the writer of the paper, is for the guy who made the comment: what do you rate something bad and not give an explanation?
- 02/06/2003
- 22:07:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
great job technobabe, but i just cant see Hitler as a great ruler
- 01/06/2003
- 09:12:08
- Score: 5 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
good job on this paper, it is very informative, keep up the good work
- 01/06/2003
- 09:10:50
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
well written but kinda useless for most people, but i am not most people :) ill bee needing this next year because i am taking chem, so this is a definite good rating, good luck next year in your next science class (physics?)
- 31/05/2003
- 20:28:58
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
sorry guys for my first comment, i didnt know that this was a stolen paper
- 31/05/2003
- 20:22:04
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this is a well written paper, keep up the good work
- 30/05/2003
- 19:44:18
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
if i could id take back my old comment and rateing!
- 30/05/2003
- 19:39:46
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is well written with an...um...interesting title
- 29/05/2003
- 22:03:03
- Score: 16 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
this is pretty well done, good job
- 29/05/2003
- 22:00:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
very informative, good job
- 29/05/2003
- 21:31:36
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
this is written well, keep up the good work!
- 29/05/2003
- 21:30:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i have been...um...enlightened...about the canadian army
- 29/05/2003
- 21:28:56
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
as i said...interesting paper
- 29/05/2003
- 21:27:27
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is well written, good job
- 29/05/2003
- 21:26:35
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a good book guide, keep up the good work
- 29/05/2003
- 20:53:36
- Score: 17 out of 18 people found this comment useful.
what is this....it makes no sence...why how did it pass screening?
- 29/05/2003
- 20:51:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is full of "wisdom"
- 29/05/2003
- 20:50:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this is pretty well written and is quite interesting, and as the other guy said, it should be graded higher
- 29/05/2003
- 20:48:38
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
this is very well written, but i fail to realize how these are journal enteries..but thats no problem cuz its a good essay
- 29/05/2003
- 20:47:13
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
well...the two middle pararahps are good, but in my opinion, they should be reversed. also, the other paragraphs, at least in my opinion, are too short. However, the facts are clear and it gets the point across
- 29/05/2003
- 20:45:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
good job on this paper...thats about it
- 29/05/2003
- 18:12:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay gets the point across but it is written too informally, rember that you should never incluse the words "i, me, you, we"
- 28/05/2003
- 23:11:51
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
the title says it all, "nice job" and keep up the good work on this!
- 28/05/2003
- 23:06:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
if you didnt guess, this paper is great for the facts, but it doesnt really flow very well, so if you wanted to turn it in as an actual essay, take the min subject points and make them into opening statements for a paragraph and put some closings for them too. This would be a great essay with the proper format of:I. Opening ParagraphII. Main BodyA. BathsB. TheaterC. MilitaryIII. Cloasing ParagraphHowever, i see where you were goin with this paper, and it DOES get the points and facts over to the reader, so good job!
- 28/05/2003
- 23:05:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
as dogface said, good job on the facts but a bit more of in-depth analysis would make the paper much bettertry sparknotes.com, they have some good stuff there for most books, im not sure about this one tho, but you can still try it out...for future papers al teast
- 28/05/2003
- 22:57:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
good job on this one...made me think about what you were saying(hope you like this comment better than the other one on the feminist thing lol)
- 28/05/2003
- 22:55:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
great job on this, good facts, good writing, keep up the good work!
- 28/05/2003
- 22:53:29
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
this is a pretty well written paper, keep up the good work!
- 28/05/2003
- 21:32:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
yeah...what dogface said
- 28/05/2003
- 21:22:43
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
i have made a new version for you all to use, but i have only sumbited it as an article, so i hope that it can become one, becuause i know that only few people will see this current one....so i hope that more people will be able to use the ideas on this
- 28/05/2003
- 21:18:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a well written paper and it clearly states your ideas
- 28/05/2003
- 20:12:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
as i said...interesting
- 28/05/2003
- 19:32:56
- Score: 3 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
good job on this paper, i wish i had it when i was reading the book tho...
- 28/05/2003
- 19:29:55
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
would you have ever guessed that i had to write this paper for a geometry class in freshman year?
- 28/05/2003
- 18:41:42
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
good job on this, you covered alot of stuff in it and put alot of strat facts
- 27/05/2003
- 20:56:34
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
this is a very well writen paper....i just wish i had it when i was writing my own one about this topic
- 27/05/2003
- 20:53:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
well this is an interesting topic to write on, lol...good work on the paper, but i think you should have put some of your own ideas into it
- 27/05/2003
- 20:50:59
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
this is great, its exactly what i was looking for for my LA class! thanks
- 27/05/2003
- 18:03:38
- Score: 1 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
sorry about the way that the outline looks at the end, i guess HTML does not support it...but its info is still correct
- 26/05/2003
- 10:16:05
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
i also after reading this poped my fight club dvd into my computer and you are right....good job on this paper (i found the movie kinda weird tho, with the two personalities, i didnt get it the first time)
- 26/05/2003
- 00:03:54
- Score: 6 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
wtf? this is a coppied paper off http://www.religioustolerance.org/euth1.htm
- 24/05/2003
- 21:39:43
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
thanks, thris really helped me on my religion project for school
- 24/05/2003
- 21:36:24
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a great paper and I dont see any problems in it, sorry if that was something that your teachers had also been saying.
- 24/05/2003
- 18:03:13
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
what this actually a school requirement?
- 24/05/2003
- 17:36:12
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
this is good stuff...and its helpfull, you should compile some of these things that you write into an article
- 24/05/2003
- 17:26:41
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this is an interesting paper...ill remember it next time im printing out a paper
- 24/05/2003
- 17:17:10
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is great! good job, you covered the best topics on this idea
- 24/05/2003
- 16:09:03
- Score: 0 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
....and what about the new writing part about the SATs?...i will the unlucky first year to have to do them
- 24/05/2003
- 15:19:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is pretty good and gets the facts across, but the structure needs a little work, mostly in the opening statements of the first paragraphs, but good job on everything else.
- 22/05/2003
- 23:59:53
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.