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  • The Bee Eater

    Well organized paper and your concrete details support your thesis. The last paragraph could be stronger with more of your own thoughts. But overall, well written and I understand what you are tellling about the story.
    • 28/05/2003
    • 08:46:38
    • Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Moral Dilemna

    An interesting dilemna and well written but does not explore all the possibilities. More research about the Dr.s' responsibility in this situation would be valuable. Maybe the Dr. could tell the patient that she knows the wife and guilt him into tellling.
    • 27/05/2003
    • 12:19:46
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • The Simpson's

    The paper is written well with a good summary but it would be more interesting if you put in some of your own comments on the episode. You could include some of your thoughts on how this episode relates to your life or the world as you see it.
    • 27/05/2003
    • 12:08:38
    • Score: 5 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • A Conflict after High School

    Well written. I could follow along and really understand your problem of deciding on college. I can really relate to your paper and hope I make the right decision like you did.
    • 24/05/2003
    • 14:32:19
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Manipulation of the Truth by the Powerful

    Very thought provoking and well written. Makes you think about the reality of the world compared to what is shown on tv. Do you notice the fear mongering of television news on airplane crashes, african bees etc and the reality is these are really rare occurrences but tv makes them sound like we are in danger.
    • 24/05/2003
    • 14:23:17
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.