This essay was ok, except for the fact that it is kind of "all over the place". One minute the author of the essay is saying marijuana should be legalized, the next minute he is saying that legalizing drugs would cause increased use, addiction, etc. This essay does not have a clear thesis, nor does it have a strong introduction. It kind of just "starts" and rambles on and on. It was, however, very informative, especially to someone who has no knowledge about the topic. This essay sort of sums everything up.
- 29/05/2003
- 22:10:28
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.