I have always wanted to try to learn to play golf, and found this clear and informative! Thank you.
- 02/08/2003
- 19:36:58
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Factual information would strengthen this piece. It's current strength lies in its ability to provoke discussion and thought.
- 02/08/2003
- 19:20:51
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
The structure of this essay needs work for ease of comprehension, but is informative and interesting.
- 02/08/2003
- 19:17:10
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This article gave me a good brief overview and is clear and easy to read. Well done.
- 02/08/2003
- 19:13:23
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
There are a few grammatical errors in here, but otherwise good. An example of a haiku poem would have been of benefit to people who have never read one.
- 02/08/2003
- 19:06:20
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
It's interesting that Dali is not mentioned under surrealism,...he is almost synonymous with it. And I think the fur covered cup is generally associated with the Dadaist movement not the Surrealists. Other than that, a succinct summary, and I liked how you incorporated your personal impressions.
- 02/08/2003
- 19:03:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
A good essay, backed up with reseach.
- 23/07/2003
- 21:08:16
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
The spelling and grammar in this needs work if it is to be understood clearly.
- 23/07/2003
- 21:03:59
- Score: 12 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
Good work, clear and flows well.
- 23/07/2003
- 21:02:00
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
I am not familiar with this game but it gave me enough information to be able to know what I would be buying or getting myself into. Thanks.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:58:06
- Score: 21 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
The events are somewhat simplified but this is a good essay for this level. Well done.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:54:13
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Although short, this article is articulate and demonstrates a logical thought process.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:50:51
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
This essay appears to be incomplete. Also, the title should say 'evil' rather than evilness.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:47:41
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This essay is repetitive and slightly misleading. It doesn't give a theoretical approach to essay construction...more a personal experience or diarised account.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:45:41
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This essay is informative and of a good standard for Grade Ten.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:41:29
- Score: 14 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
This is a logical and well-structured piece that needs a little work on the spelling /grammar.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:39:15
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Well written and good references.
- 23/07/2003
- 20:36:48
- Score: 14 out of 15 people found this comment useful.