While I do not completely agree with your POV, this is a well researched and organized essay. Lots of stats in just the right places. @#%#$% AWESOME! Keep it up.
- 06/10/2004
- 00:16:35
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
It gets strait to the point and covers a lot of information. Very well done.
- 28/08/2004
- 16:48:58
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I have read the bradford burns book and think that this essay does a good job of summarizing his chapter on the "Folk" of latin America. This just happens to be one of the only chapters in the book which I felt were worthy of remebering. Well done.
- 02/05/2004
- 20:36:12
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
outstanding essay. Well thought out and researched.
- 18/03/2004
- 13:48:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Short but still informative. Well done.
- 30/09/2003
- 14:29:55
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I wanted to rate this as a good essay but my mouse slipped. It is well writen and very informative. Great job.
- 30/09/2003
- 14:13:37
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I thought it was good, but it hardly touched on some things he did after the October revolution. It's a pretty good essay for the short length.
- 29/09/2003
- 06:18:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your give good reasons to help make your point. Well written. I totally agree with your thesis also. Keep up the good work.
- 28/09/2003
- 15:49:00
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I don't agree with your last sentance when you say that " Sexual harassment remains a major problem in high school and in the workplace, but I just don't see it being one in college anymore," but I still think the essay is very well written. You put a lot of research into this and it shows. Great job.
- 26/09/2003
- 16:38:50
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I don't think that your paper clearly defines what Americanism is and who Americans are. I have always thought that culture in the United States was a fusion of many different cultures. I think it would strengthen this paper to have your statistics compared to those of another country. I might not agree with your opinion but I respect your freedom to express yourself. Is "freedom of speech" part of Americanism? Just asking.
- 01/09/2003
- 14:36:41
- Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Great evidence, especially with Anna Kournikova and Women's Beach Volleyball. Great job, keep it up.
- 21/08/2003
- 14:39:02
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
There is a nice summary of Roman history but I don't think there is enough of a comparison with the U.S. in your paper. Altogether not too bad.
- 21/08/2003
- 14:33:11
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This reminds me of when I was 19 and howitzers would sing me to sleep. This is my favorite paper on this whole web site! Great job.
- 13/08/2003
- 22:38:24
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like the introduction of France's Merovingian dynasty and the details about the decline of Carolingian rule. It helps put perspective on the begining and end of his reign. Well done.
- 13/08/2003
- 21:43:09
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I just took a class on ancient Greece and this paper did a great job on sumarizing the formation of the Delian League in a short amount of space. Well done.
- 13/08/2003
- 14:19:48
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You put your point across clearly and back it up well with your interpretation of the article. Nice job.
- 08/08/2003
- 17:02:34
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
It covered all of the major aspects of Stalin's rule. Great paper for 11th grade. Well done.
- 08/08/2003
- 16:57:44
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You diserve a a pat on the back. This is a great paper. It is amazingly descriptive with a deep underlying meaning. Bravo.
- 07/08/2003
- 07:44:57
- Score: 20 out of 20 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed reading this paper. It is very descriptive. Excellent job.
- 07/08/2003
- 07:40:46
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
What's a si fu?
- 03/08/2003
- 09:24:47
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Although I don't share your views, you point is well presented. The alternative you present sounds good but you don't really state if it is cost effective or if there are any more alternatives. Overall it is an excellent paper. Great job. One question, have you ever eaten a hamburger?
- 25/07/2003
- 21:24:33
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This is a great paper. All of the points are clear and well argued. It is very informative and has helped me a lot to formulate ideas for a paper I am doing on the same subject. Great work!
- 24/07/2003
- 17:04:39
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Well written, well researched and very informative. Very good job.
- 15/07/2003
- 07:33:17
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You covered all the main points in that time frame with out getting political. I think you did a great job explaining NEP and the events surrounding it. Great job.
- 10/07/2003
- 14:51:29
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Great paper. Well researched, but I do agree with the other comment about your sources. I really enjoyed reading it. Good job.
- 10/07/2003
- 14:43:45
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
The begining of the last paragraph is hard to undestand. Plus, I think that your argument about smoking effecting the environment is kind of weak. I'm sure that automobile exhast has far more carcinogens than tobacco smoke and I don't see a crusade yet to ban public driving.
- 10/07/2003
- 14:31:57
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
A very interesting and well researched essay with very good content. Good job
- 28/06/2003
- 09:42:56
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It is amazing how ad agencies herd people into believing bottled water is "Safer". Good job. This paper was well reserched and made a good points in a short time.
- 26/06/2003
- 22:11:48
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I don't know if this is really a PHD level paper but I like it.
- 26/06/2003
- 20:45:18
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I saw a few spelling or gramatical errors but heck, that's what spell check is for. Good job
- 26/06/2003
- 20:34:30
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Well researched and eventhough it was long it kept my interest. At some points it became hard to read through the many citations but overall it's a very good paper. Well done.
- 26/06/2003
- 20:06:52
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think that some of the facts and dates are jubbled around a little. Otherwise it is a decent paper.
- 26/06/2003
- 19:53:03
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This paper was well researched. It's very informative although I was searching for something about his life during and after the revolution. Good job.
- 26/06/2003
- 19:35:54
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It makes me think back to the old days when I was in high school (1998), before cellphones were in everyones pockets. Back then when us old timers needed to make an "emergency" call, we would just pop a couple of dimes in the nearest payphone. How old school is that? Ah, the good old days. Great job on the paper.
- 22/06/2003
- 02:13:46
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Well done this is an excellent summary of the book.
- 22/06/2003
- 01:11:34
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I think it is a little vague. There are more symilarities in the two texts that you don't mention, but I guess that's ok for a short paper.
- 22/06/2003
- 00:57:26
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Good summary of his life in a short essay. Good job.
- 22/06/2003
- 00:50:31
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
You say early in the paper that athena was conceived from Mytida and then later on you claim she was the daughter of Metis. Other than that it's ok.
- 22/06/2003
- 00:46:15
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
Great work. I really enjoyed reading your paper. You presented lots of examples and statistics which help your paper tremendously. Well done.
- 12/06/2003
- 17:21:19
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You explained your points very clearly. I don't think you gave enough evidence to persuade me to agree with your thesis but altogether it is a well written essay.
- 12/06/2003
- 17:07:22
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Nice short essay. I believe you are right about justification depending on which side of the terroist act you are on. Good job.
- 12/06/2003
- 16:58:46
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Ilike this essay. It flowed smoothly and the evedence provided was very persuasive. good work.
- 12/06/2003
- 16:51:43
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I have to agree with the previous comment, this is excellent work for 10th grade. Good job.
- 11/06/2003
- 15:40:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Thanks a lot. It was very informative and well writen. It has realy helped me understand FDR for a paper that I am doing. This is the best paper here on this topic. Well Done.
- 11/06/2003
- 15:36:20
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is a very informative paper and also very true. Men and women often allow themselves to fall into these stereotypes from what they see in their cultures and the media. Many young people are trying to break free of these stereotypes but unfortunaly they will be around for a while. Well done
- 10/06/2003
- 14:15:49
- Score: 16 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
I like the wage comparison of Eisner and workers in Hati. It is clear to see he is exploiting the people of other countries just so he can have more money than most people would know what to do with. Well written and I enjoyed reading it.
- 10/06/2003
- 14:03:59
- Score: 21 out of 21 people found this comment useful.
This is a well written paper it has helped me a lot. Good job.
- 09/06/2003
- 18:56:56
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Very informative.
- 04/06/2003
- 17:49:37
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Thanks, this is a great paper. It was well writen and researched and has helped me alot.
- 04/06/2003
- 16:04:13
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I love this movie and one of my favorite characters is Mr. Blonde. I like you analysis of this film. Good job.
- 03/06/2003
- 19:20:45
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you handle this issue. Sure many people do not want porn on the internet but it is there and not much can be done about it. I hate pop ups of any kind and I agree that measures need to be taken to eliminate them. Well done.
- 03/06/2003
- 18:42:57
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
some small grammatical errors but it is pretty good.
- 03/06/2003
- 17:42:41
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Great job. The dates are very important. This essay has helped me
- 03/06/2003
- 17:35:39
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I agree with the previous comments that it needs a conclusion. I like the evedence that you present. good job
- 03/06/2003
- 17:32:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think your opinion can be argued against to easily. There isn't much given to support your claims. You didn't really mention Groups like the FDA, USDA, and the EPA who spend millions of tax dollars to regulate the food we eat and how it is grown. All together it was very good eventhough I might not agree.
- 01/06/2003
- 14:58:07
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I like they way you present them as having human characteristics as aposed to other Religious gods. great paper
- 01/06/2003
- 14:49:59
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Well written and informative
- 01/06/2003
- 14:45:04
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Budeget cuts have drastically affected the capabilities of our armed forces. Yet when conflicts do happen the American people want a proficiant fighting force that they don't want to fund. Excellent work.
- 01/06/2003
- 13:30:29
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Outstanding. Very well written paper. I am really impressed.
- 01/06/2003
- 13:23:21
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Well done I really enjoyed it although I was in the Marines and I think they have a better leadership program. But I guess that makes me Bias. Great job
- 01/06/2003
- 13:14:09
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
You supported your point well for being a short paper
- 01/06/2003
- 13:04:23
- Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Execllent summary of his role in greek myths
- 01/06/2003
- 12:56:58
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think you could have thrown in some Carl Jung ideas
- 01/06/2003
- 12:52:38
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You sure have all of the times she helped them, but I think it would also be interesting to know why Athene helped them.
- 01/06/2003
- 12:45:04
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I think you could have paraphased the myth a little more.
- 01/06/2003
- 12:38:04
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I guess even a lunatic can have aspects of a good leader.
- 01/06/2003
- 12:22:37
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I like the philosophical part you put in
- 01/06/2003
- 12:15:57
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Well done. Great comparison of many different religions
- 01/06/2003
- 12:05:31
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
good use of examples for both free will and fate
- 28/05/2003
- 16:37:15
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you use the evidense and ask what people would do with out belief
- 28/05/2003
- 16:30:07
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.