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I though the essay/ story was very well written. It included many details. Much of like a newpaper would have done, if not better. It is very informative. Good job- 30/05/2003
- 15:48:21
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This essay needs more elaboration. You should site the bible or quote important theories of the universe.- 30/05/2003
- 15:42:35
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.