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  • Childish... some of the things you say are all out false

    your essay doesn't seem to be organized very well...btw. esther didn't ditch willard because he slept with the waitress but because he had always put on such an innocent pure facade that completely contradicted his true nature."...I had just decided to ditch Buddy WIllard for once and for all, not because he'd slept with that waitress but because he didn't have the honest guts to admit it straight off to everbody and face up to it as part of his character" (72).
    • 22/01/2004
    • 07:22:00
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Seems a little novice for a junior....

    i sort of felt like you weren't able to express yourself fully and you didn't seem to complete your sentances in a way that would fully explain the book to a person who hadn't read it. it makes me wonder what school you're attending if 11th graders can write like this and get an A+. i'm a freshman and i couldn't even get away with this essay. sorry :-/
    • 22/01/2004
    • 01:03:05
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.