User Details For: BlondeHoney

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  • Good

    I think the information was very good. But when you get info from a book you should try to make it sound like your own or site it.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 22:14:46
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice essay

    Wow, I learned a lot from this. Not something I would read on the beach but very good. Nice research and info.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 22:09:54
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Info

    nice job of stating some important psych information.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 22:02:19
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice job

    Good job with this essay. You bring up some good points. Nice.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 22:01:00
    • Score: 13 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    The essay is pretty good but you should always proof-read your work. It helps to aviod any unnecessary subtractions from your grade.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 21:59:19
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • I agree

    I totally agree that gay marriages should be allowed. They need to have the same rights and abilities as other married couples. Nice essay.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 21:57:23
    • Score: 4 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Good research on Piaget but proof-reading was necessary here. Some grammatical errors also.
    • 06/12/2003
    • 21:49:43
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Informative

    If anyone needs to brush up on their info about computer this is the essay to read. Good contruction and information.
    • 28/10/2003
    • 07:37:23
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Everything is done very well here. One can tell this is upper-level writing.
    • 28/10/2003
    • 07:36:06
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    well written and researched. A+
    • 28/10/2003
    • 07:33:49
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice job

    I dont know much about this topic but the information seemed very well researched. Nicely written also.
    • 28/10/2003
    • 07:32:21
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    I think everyone cant relate to this esaay. Nice job.
    • 28/10/2003
    • 07:30:40
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Nice job and well written. Also good information.
    • 28/10/2003
    • 07:29:02
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Very informative and nicely written.
    • 28/10/2003
    • 07:28:13
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    Alittle brief. I guess because you didnt want too much "fluff" or filler in the esaay. Well Done.
    • 30/07/2003
    • 06:28:38
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Imagery

    I like the use of imagery with evil and disturbing. This story is just that. Be careful with using symbols within an essay it could lead to a deduction in points. Overall good job.
    • 29/07/2003
    • 17:22:06
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Start

    This was a good start but your intro needs work. That will come with time as you write more. You raise interesting points but its hard because most of these facts are known. Trying to put a different twist on historical facts makes them more interesting.
    • 29/07/2003
    • 16:44:29
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This is a very well written eassy with good examples that appeal to all ages. That helps teachers and students relate and understand what your message here was.
    • 29/07/2003
    • 16:41:32
    • Score: 11 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Marketing

    Interesting insight to the world of marketing. You said toward the beginning that this was a UK strategy, I wonder if it applies worldwide? Really good info.
    • 12/07/2003
    • 13:21:07
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    This was interesting. I wonder why you would post this story here since it wasn't based on another published work. None the less, it was good, creative and different.
    • 12/07/2003
    • 13:18:14
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This was a well researched essay. I liked the way your quotes ran smoothly and did not interrupt the paragraph. I also liked that you mentioned different points of view to support and unsupport your topic.
    • 12/07/2003
    • 13:14:34
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    I found it interesting that you are a second year college student. Your writing does not really reflect that. First using "I" and other direct personal references should not be in this level of writing. Also, quoting a dictionary is another form of lower level writing. But the topic was well researched and informative. Sorry, I think this essay could have been written much better.
    • 12/07/2003
    • 13:05:45
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Review

    This essay gives a good revire of the book but doesnt tell the reader much about why certain actions were casued. It needs a little indept, or "peeling the onion", analysis to be much better
    • 22/06/2003
    • 14:25:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.