The grammar mistakes in this essay made it slightly difficult for me to get through, because I felt like I was reading a middle school report rather than a high-schoolers, and they kept distracting me from the overall content because I kept wanting to take a pen and just mark on the screen!On the other hand, once I managed to get past said mistakes, the essay itself, apart from not seeming to be very well thought out in the structure, was obviously something that you tried to put some thought into it. So, try to proofread a little better next time and you'll do fine!
- 04/07/2003
- 15:10:33
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.