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  • Night

    Your essay is more of a summary than an analysis. There are a number of other elements which you began to analyse and simply dropped. All in all it was a good attempt.P.S - You make a strong statement by saying that "that is what the author wanted ..." to add validity you MUST back it up with outside sources
    • 10/08/2004
    • 11:55:30
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Remember the Jews

    It was not made clear for what purpose this paper was written, but it is not "academic writing". You've made a nice attempt to to remind the world what the jews endured in Europe, therefore I commend you for your writing. Although you should have made it clear that despite the three sources you consulted with there are many more out there that would tell other stories that are similar but different
    • 08/08/2004
    • 05:47:30
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Poem study 2- Robert Browning (1812-1889) 'My Last Duchess'

    The latter part of the essay actually discusses the poem. It is important he to remember that when analyzing a piece of work it is NOT necessary to discuss the authors past unless it is relevant to a point in the paper. The early part of the essay is merely a page filler and that distracts the reader
    • 08/08/2004
    • 05:36:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A Cute Poem

    The poem is "cute" but there are a number of things you can work on in order to perfect your future pieces. You need to pay attention to punction - punctution may serve enhance emotion and dramatization. Also, the poem is a bit immature. Work on the level of maturity in the language and I'm sure your next poem will be better.
    • 08/08/2004
    • 05:31:10
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice try

    There are a lot of facts that have been over looked. In scientific observation everything should be noted ... but it was a good attempt!
    • 25/11/2003
    • 08:25:37
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely Written

    The essay speaks the implied reader, it does not lecture. It is vey well written, informative and easily understood.
    • 19/07/2003
    • 10:10:04
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Factual

    The essay is good and provides factual evidence.
    • 19/07/2003
    • 08:06:54
    • Score: 7 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
  • This critical essay is a basic account of Nazi Germany's discrimination against the Jews throughout World War II.

    The essay is written in a consice and clear manner.The website :"Yad Vashem" website will supply further precise details, pertaining to Holocaust research.
    • 19/07/2003
    • 00:13:13
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.