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  • Interesting...

    I find it interesting, as I've been a part of the Australian public school system all my life - at the moment, I'm a yr 9 attending Penrith High in NSW, and have neither seen nor experienced any of the scenarios raised by your essay.This is not to say your essay is universally untrue: I do believe there are schools out there in which the things you write of are becoming - have become - reality. But there are also schools in which this is not the case.However biased your essay, you raised a strong and convincing point for your argument - keep it up.
    • 14/08/2003
    • 00:54:25
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • 7/10

    Good information - you used figures and compound names to your advantage. The layout could have been better, and a lack of paragraphing will bring down your score. You did, however, sound like you knew what you were on about, and even if this essay didn't "convince" me of anything, it was very informative of a subject increasingly hard to get information on.
    • 02/08/2003
    • 18:53:21
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • ...

    Though I don't necessarily agree with some of your views, your case is well thought out and well presented, leaving little room for argument or criticism, particularly in your references to Aquinas, Locke and Nozik. A little short, but it stayed on topic nicely.Keep up the good work.
    • 29/07/2003
    • 05:56:56
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
  • Well Written

    A good essay that left little subject matter out, yet kept the reader from boredom through use of accurate retelling and interesting interpretations.Spelling could have been better in places - I suggest just re-reading and fixing up a few of the obvious errors, but don't kill yourself over it.
    • 29/07/2003
    • 05:46:27
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.