User Details For: browneyedbabydoll
Essay List
"Blindness" by Jose Saramago.
- 1296 words (5 pages)
- 90
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Religions found in literary works and across the world.
- 457 words (2 pages)
- 35
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Hermann Hesse's "Siddhartha".
- 3473 words (14 pages)
- 87
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Can Unconfessed sins destroy the Soul?
- 692 words (3 pages)
- 24
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Comments List
Not Catchy
I like your topic and paper except as a junior in high school I can't get into it very well there isn't a catchy title or opening line or even something to draw my intrest to make me want to read it.. otherwitse it was good.- 17/08/2003
- 09:22:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great Job
I think you wrote a well worded essay, there are a few things I might have changed though I see that you constantly use The Inspector and Priestly throughout the essay many find some substitutes or pronouns to fit them. but, your description of the play was excellent I could tell everything I would have need to know from your essay. Great Job!- 16/08/2003
- 15:52:38
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.