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  • WOW!

    What a great essay! I really admire the depth and the specificity of this essay - it really could be a short article for a magazine it's so good. I like that timmiller examined *all* aspects of sex education <i>and</i> incorporated his own opinions. Very good!
    • 08/10/2004
    • 16:59:26
    • Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Nicely done!

    I'd say that Teenslut has the start of a really good critical essay - I'm not sure why it's in the European History folder, but that's different.I think this essay would be marvelous if someone fleshed it out a little further - who is Lucky? What has the plot been before Lucky's speech? Why does it matter? - Answering questions like that would really improve this piece, which for now is really skimming the surface of a very deep pool.
    • 08/10/2004
    • 16:56:18
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.