The paper does not really include a comment on women being the devil. I chose to read this because that aspect of the title intrigued me, yet very little was said about it. Also, the writer used poor gramatical and punctuation tools. Sentences seem to start the same, and (s)he must not have a thesaurus (sp) to change some over-used words. I get the feeling that the student copied much of the information directly or nearly word for word from a reference material. There was no need to use quotes, as the things written in the quotes were not significant enough to be written in the specific wording of the quote. I am truly surprized that this is a college student, as I feel that I write on a higher level and I am still in High School. This topic was a great one, and could be written much better. I think more time could have been spent to turn a great topic into a more fabulous paper.
- 03/09/2003
- 17:16:54
- Score: 14 out of 16 people found this comment useful.