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Winning isn't everything.
The essay was informative but a little on the dry side. I would elaborate with a few more examples of winning that is not everything. Maybe do a example of the hundreds of athletics that strave themselves to go faster or etc. Just needs alittle more in details. Great essay otherwise.- 02/04/2002
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