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  • An overall good essay

    Many good points were made in this essay, but a few difficulties were present. First, the organization was a bit confusing, and seemed to jump around a lot. There also didn't seem to be a clear thesis. The Dispossessed seemed to be the most refered-to book in the essay, and I think that the essay might be a bit more balanced if it were to include more examples from some of the other books. There were a few spelling errors in the essay, but none made it difficult to decipher the meaning of the essay.Overall it was a very good job!
    • 23/01/2006
    • 00:36:27
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