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Essay List
"The Limitations of Globalization and Transnationalism"
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"God's Divine Justice in Dante's 'Inferno'"
- 2847 words (11 pages)
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"The Waning Influence of Christianity in Medieval Europe"
- 2113 words (8 pages)
- 105
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The Absence of Fertility in T.S. Eliot's "The Wasteland"
- 2637 words (11 pages)
- 92
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Systems of Inequality for Females and Colonized Peopl in Virgina Woolf's "A Room of One's Own" and Franz Ferdinand's "Wretched of the Earth"
- 2143 words (9 pages)
- 44
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The Hypocrisy of Imperialism in "Heart of Darkness"
- 2665 words (11 pages)
- 61
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Regression to Childhood in "Greasy Lake"
- 2574 words (10 pages)
- 42
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Comments List
Grammar and Vocabularly need work
The grammar and sentence structure in this essay needs to be cleaned up a lot. The information presented is fairly accurate, but should be more indepth. The awkward wording and poor choice of words at some points make the sentences clunky and difficult to read. Rearranging the sentences and using a thesaurus will make the paper flow better.- 15/12/2004
- 15:01:02
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