You say you wrote this in the 7th grade? How long did it take you. Forgive me if I'm suspicios, but it just seems a little odd because it just doesn't seem right for a 7th grader to be writing about this kind of thing. Well if you did write it, or if you did write it in 7th grade, Then it's a good paper. Good probably job! =|
- 12/02/2004
- 14:50:15
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
good essay and book report. This book is by a pagan so it's easily an evil book. i read it. you made a very good statement about this book. well written, good vocab, Good job.
- 12/02/2004
- 14:41:11
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is definately a stolen paper. If you want to be remembered as a noble or good writer, try WRITING YOUR OWN PAPER!!! Now i don't look so bad getting two papers rejected because of bad rating. >=(
- 11/02/2004
- 15:43:52
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
it was an interesting topic and i loved the documentation and work cited, but it was not very well written. you need to read the article about writing a good essay. sorry if my comment seems a little harshe, but i think it's good to hear this
- 10/02/2004
- 20:26:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this essay was very boring. i understand you are doing a Rhetorical speech, but you should probably find a different topic because no one listents to these kinds of speeches. I loved that you used a Bibliography. M<ost people REALLY ned to do this because they can be accused of plagarism. sorry if my comments anger you
- 10/02/2004
- 18:13:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Look at that another Bibliography. I love it when people do that because then you can learn if that is the truth about the subject. I'll check that out. other than that, i have always loved topics close to this one. Very interesting. GOOD JOB! =D
- 10/02/2004
- 16:04:01
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
you've got some big word here. I wonder if some of them are even words. Not very interesting but then again i never liked laguage or why we learn language. I am glad you told us what your sources or people you take from were; most people do not have Bibliographies. I don't usually use bibliographies, but i should.
- 10/02/2004
- 16:01:09
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I thought this essay was kind of boring. you should find some ways to catch the attention of your audience. Try to think of what your audienc wouyld want to hear about them. Other than that there was nothing i found wron exept for some maybe spelled wron words. Good layout, the info. soundedd ok and it was definate ly different. Ok job! :D
- 10/02/2004
- 15:55:16
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i was amazed to read this and still be awake. not that i didn't like it. I't was long, but still very well written. good job!:)
- 10/02/2004
- 15:33:23
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I'm not a big philosophy person, but this helped me to understand what it's about partly. Keep up the good work.
- 10/02/2004
- 13:30:27
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Great opening, and good structure. I just want to know how you write like this. Great job. you deserve a better score for this essay. Over all i loved this essay. ther'es no problem with this essay in my idea. you make this topic real, and you have an idea of how to write. you could really go places. Good job! :D
- 10/02/2004
- 13:27:51
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
you're idea is very cool because you used creative ideas to support you're essay. Good title, good essay, good moral conclusion.
- 10/02/2004
- 13:22:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I read this essay and i was astonished. you explained everyone and everything and i believe most of it. A work of art in my point of view. Good job! ;)
- 10/02/2004
- 13:20:21
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i don't think iv'e read very much about this topic, but it is very different and interesting.A little too long for something like thisGood paragraph strucureVery explanatory & imfomativeClearly putGOOD JOB!
- 10/02/2004
- 13:14:28
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
you need to work on some vaugeness with verb tense and keep the tenses the same. Overall I think that this essay should receive the regular level of praise. ;) Try to keep up the good work.
- 10/02/2004
- 11:51:04
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very well written. Good description. This movie scared me out of my skin. That was when i was five years of age. I still like the movie. I know exactly what you're saying about the movie. I would understand this "Critique" even if i had'nt seen it. Good Job! ;)
- 10/02/2004
- 11:27:38
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I don't know if this was copied but if not it's very well written and it has easily understood points. Good job!
- 10/02/2004
- 11:18:45
- Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.