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  • Home Economics?

    I think the essay as a whole is good as far a grammar. I can't see a valuabe point for context other than a random home economic assignment. Saying "this is another point because here's why" doesn't generally make for a good essay. I found myself wondering the grade on the report. Also, to the writer, plase do not take my comments to heart... I'm a college student and have possible forgotten what high school essays were like!
    • 05/12/2002
    • 22:16:25
    • Score: 8 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Needed last minute...

    Generally when I take an essay, I go through, change a lot of things, and in the end have virtually my own essay from the start. In this case, I don't see much that I have to change. I think for this to be a regular user essay, the regular users are getting a deal. Also, for anyone that uses this essay, you should always make the effort to go through and change some stuff just in case the teacher looks it up!
    • 05/12/2002
    • 22:07:43
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.