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I have always believed that poetry is an excellent way to vent your feelings and express yourself. This is so mysterious. You will know what you truly mean. Your readers will keep wondering...that just truly adds to the suspense. Very good work indeed!

A very good poem. It kind of grasps the reader and makes you want to read more. It was also very creative. Keep up the good work.

i like very much the way you intertwined the light and dark imagery to fully display the instensity & ambiguity of the speaker. that was very well done.

this is a really good poem. It may seem a bit confusing since no one really fears a shadow, but the style is amazing and catches a readers attention. It's also very mysterious

iam me. iam what i am. iam also a student .

But iam the one you hate and i am always around.-your shadow.interesting.i love this little poem,iit is fascinating.cool, i mean uuulllaaalllaaa!!!

Makes you think. nice style, its kinda catchy. nice touch @ the end. =D

I think it's really hard to crit poetry, since this is a very personal medium of expression. I can say, however, that I did enjoy reading this. Poetry is something that often lingers...

Hmm it's not a creative masterpiece but it is quite quirky/pretty. Take that as a compliment as I'm quite critical :-)

Simply astounding and most profound. I'm impressed.

This is a wonderful peice of work. You have captured so much. I am left speechless. All i can say it... GREAT!!!!

im pretty impressed i usually dont like reading poetry but i loved yours.

It's an awesome poem that's profound and really makes one think about everything that's around them and that affects them.. Good job.

in a strange way, this poem reminds me of metallica's song Sad But True. i really think this is excellent creativity at work.

this is one of ur best works yet!

Brilliant piece. its dark and mysterious, well done and good work!

Very Cool