Backstreet Abortions

Your entire essay, seems like it came from a book or internet site. There is no introduction, conclusioon, or what happened with the "abortion act",you need to elaborate on this, and where did you site your information from? Critical information in an essay

Interesting historical aspect of abortion in the UK. However, there are quite a few grammatical, sentence structure, organizational and spelling errors. The conclusion ends rather abruptly without bringing the argument to a close. Overall, the paper needs some rework. The idea is coming across, but not quite there.

Although I agree with everyone else who said that the essay is not finished yet and needs some work, it may not be as bad if it had a introduction and a conclusion. The reader is left hanging, and also has no clue where this is coming from.

Sorry to be a nuisance to you but, your paper is quite frankly not finished yet. I've also spotted some flaws(typos)to your paper too. You've lacked on argument wise. More plot is needed to this paper. I awarded you a yellow rating.

I do not think your sentence structure is all that bad and what does need work I believe has happened because this piece seems rushed -am I right? What you have to say is intelligently enough put but you could do with some quotes from reputable experts to give your argument credence, I suggest you look back at your research on this topic and find some useful quotes to use. I also agree with lilmissbulldog you need an introduction and conclusion, it helps lead the reader through your work and lets them know why you are writing on this topic and what your final conclusion is. That way you avoid any confusion and people wont feel that it is unfinished.

Mainly slow down and take some more time over your research, you have some valuable facts and figures there but they need framing with a few well chosen quotes. Keep trying!

More work is needed to your paper. I gave you an average, instead of poor. In the future, more facts are needed to end your papers

I am not sure what grade this short-essay was written for, but I certainly can say that it need to be revised, "write thing ton" clearly should be changed to "right thing to". The figures seem offset as well, how positive are you that nearly 1.9 million of women were treated in only 8 years(1967-1975)?