Jenna Hecker
The Chosen, 2/23/2004
Chaim Potok's "The Chosen" follows the friendship of two pious Jewish boys, and explores the cultural divide between the Hasidic community and modern orthodoxy. The books begins with a baseball game that turns into a holy war as orthodox Jewish boys try to justify their religious practices when faced against a Hasidic team who feel themselves more pious than their adversaries. When Danny, the Hasidic protagonist, hits a ball at Reuven a bit too hard, shattering his glasses and nearly blinding him, the boys develop a friendship that opens their eyes to their individual communities.
Both boys benefit from their father's legacies, but suffer in their shadows. Reb Saunders, Danny's father, provides his son with intellectual stimulation, but not with fatherly interaction and love the Danny craves. Danny does not want to follow is father's footsteps and inherit his synagogue, instead favoring psychological studies.
Reuven encounters problems after his father gives a pro-Zionist speech at the college. The book explores the burden of being chosen. Danny was born into his position as a religious leader, as a result he feels frustrated that he gets to make very few choices of his own in his life. His experience is teenage angst being magnified by the burden of an oppressive, but vibrant Hasidic community that values his knowledge but has become dependant on his father, and as a result, his family for leadership that Danny does not necessarily feel he is able to inherit.
Danny's experience in The Chosen is one that many observant Jews grapple with, although perhaps on a smaller level, throughout their life. Judaism is a vibrant culture based religion, and one often may find themselves feeling set apart from the secular world when they are keeping Sabbath, or observing kashrut...
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This essay is not too bad for being 3 paragraphs long. As a person who has never read this book, I think a few things should be explained a little bit more if you're trying to give a synopsis of the story (which is what it looks like). For example, the reader of this essay might not know anything about "the college" that you are referring to. Is it his college (does he own it), is it a college in the neighborhood? what? Little things like that sometimes slip our minds when we are writing essays, just because we already know what it is referring to. Don't forget that you are writing this for someone else, not for yourself. You already know about the story. In order to inform, even if it is only supposed to be minimum information, the information you give needs to be explained. Other than that there are a few spelling errors that you should check before turning an essay in for example you said "morcover." Instead I think you meant moreover. minor mistake but when you're being grade the minor mistakes add up. There are also a few grammar mistakes. Overall not a bad short essay. I think you could expand this essay a lot and make it a very well written essay.
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