Comparison between American and Iranian educational system

I guess you have generalized the schools in these countries unfairly. You need to do a lot of research before you make such comparisons about difficulty of subject matter, condition of studying and so on. The essay's fairly good, nevertheless.

First off, I don't see why it is a problem immigrants want to study in the U.S.; hence your opening paragraph. What I do think is a problem, is that you think they should. If when, according to what you said, students who migrate from Iran will find their courses in the U.S. easier because of their educational backgrounds, then why come here? Honestly, if you think they are doing better there, there is no point in coming here. I, in fact, agree that educational programs in different countries are much better then those in America. I had to teach myself, early on, Spanish because I could not take the course until High School. When I traveled to Israel a couple years ago, I met a student my age who could fluently speak 5 languages, and read 3 others. That is 8 languages and he was only about 13-14! They start learning at a young age, that is the benefit.

Next, your 4th paragraph; Holy Crap!! Show me a school that allows that in the U.S. and I'll be in heaven! Otherwise, I don't know what kind of school you go to.

Finally, in your 2nd to last paragraph, I think you mean to replace facilities, with materials. It doesn't make sense otherwise. Overall, this is the craziest essay I have ever read. On a written standpoint, it is fine, but on content, I think its crazy. You definitly weren't thinking too much when you wrote this.

I think certain people have certain advantages over others based on a lot of different things. Like location for one, if a person is born in a wealthy suburb, the person is more likely to be better educated than a student in a poorer less funded and substainually larger inner-city school. My point is that Iran has the same thing, certain people and schools have certain advantages over others. Schools in Iran may be different from schools in the US but if you think a bout it schools everywhere have differences.

"Because from high school to university the courses become hard suddenly compared to the easy ones in the high schools. "


Don't start sentences with because unless you know the proper way to do it. This sentence has no subject, it is a fragment. Revise it please. I am hoping you know what is wrong. Sorry, I'm just picky about obvious grammar mistakes.

This essay over generalizes the issue that is written about. I kept waiting for the next sentence to be, "All black people like fried chicken and watermelon." or, "All white people can't dance." Life is MUCH more complex than the author would have you believe.

Great Essay!

A+++!!