Comparitive Essay

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Comparison Essay Revision Looking at myself now, I can see that in the future I will be a different person. Today, I see myself as a shy, weak, and unmotivated individual. In the future I plan to change all of this. Recently I have made some changes in my life, and in the future I will be able to make more changes. I plan to grow up and develop in to an outgoing, strong person who has some motivation in life.

Most of my life I have been a very shy person. I could not talk to people very easily. I kept to myself and never really had much to say to anyone. I do not like being this way and recently I have been able to overcome some of this and talk to people. I did this by realizing that if I ever want to get anywhere, or have fun in life, I would have to loosen up and become a little more outgoing, and that is what I did.

This leads me to believe that in the future I will be able to become even more outgoing, and actually be able to talk to people. This is true because little by little I will get better at it until eventually I will be able to completely communicate and not be shy anymore. Being outgoing is very important. Shy people do not get very far in this world, and if I want to succeed I am going to have to be able to talk to people or I will get left behind. This motivates me to change and shows me that I am going to have to be this way in the future, whether I like it or not.

Murray 2 Along with the shyness trait comes the weakness...