A Cute poem for A Cute guy

love this secret poem,i don't really know why.but i can assure you that it doesn't beat my imagination,yet it is striking.but now i am running out of things to say,so i will end here i love this poem.cool.

Seems good enough to be put in a poem collection :). Good work.

Although it wasn't an essay or paper, it was a cute poem. It does have a real feeling behind it, but I'm think it should also have some sort of explaination.

The poem is "cute" but there are a number of things you can work on in order to perfect your future pieces. You need to pay attention to punction - punctution may serve enhance emotion and dramatization. Also, the poem is a bit immature. Work on the level of maturity in the language and I'm sure your next poem will be better.

Hmm..... yes, good. But you didnt use any punctuation, and sometimes punctation is the key to a good poem. But i was cute yes, it was lovely and im sure came from deap inside your heart.

"But now I'm running out of things to say"

Never admit that you've run out of ideas. It ruins the poem! Otherwise, I thought it was lovely. Rework it please!!!! I think this could be great.

Very cute indeed, the guy must feel very lucky. He also must be very handsom to write such a good poem based on him!

You didnt use commas but it didnt take away from the good poem, excellent!