DREAMS

There maybe only a few 100 words in there but I am sure those 100 words hold a 100 million feelings and emotions within them. This poem shows the real reason why one should see dreams! Beautiful poem, with beautiful expressions...great work, deserves high scores and is thus, getting them!!!

Iam quoting your poem for a end of school assessment, illustrating change. It's late and iam over looking for poems on the net, so thats why i chose yours Iam talking about the change in dreams to reality. cheers

This sad tale is indeed blue

But to your heart it'll sink through

Daring you to start dreaming

To create a life of meaning

To make some purpose to life

To make it through that strife

Though the danger be imminent

Your dream will become permanent

And though the sands of time will pass

Your dream will stand out from the class

Good poem- especially for an eighth grader. Though I liked your other poem too, I thought this one was even better. Keep up the good work.

I like all your poems. You have a great talent. Keep up the good work and you will be sure to sore. Good luck!

Well done to you on producing such good quality poems. You obviously have a great mind, and a talent for putting your thoughts and dreams on to paper. So once more I say keep writing, and let your dreams become reality.

nice little piece.dreams ,yes they can really guide us to 'rianbow skies',where we can turn things around for mankind.keep this good work on.