Gay Marriages.

hi! I did a research paper on gay marriage also and i from some researches i did, i found the same exact information you put on your paper for marriage and polygamy with the same exact words so that is why i'm sensing plagiarism, but i'm not going to report you! Don't worry!

Unless you think i'm making it up, then i can prove it to you!

You should NEVER begin an essay with someone else's words (a quote). Use your own to draw someone in. Also, be careful of spelling. As a high school senior, that shouldn't even have to be mentioned. You shouldn't use generalizations like 'some people,' it takes away from your authority. This paper would never convince me of anything - it's poorly written, there are simple things like spelling and grammar errors that make it hard to take someone who's around 17-18 years old (and who should know how to spell) seriously, and the writer shows no authority or conviction.

It explains clearly why you think homosexuals should be treated equaly. However, if you ever read any books related to dfferent religions, you would see some of the points why gay marriages are "not right." A lot of different religions believe that a person is not born a homosexual. He gets that way because of all the perversions of modern society.

Also, a lot of research has been done on this subject for the past decade, and they have done an experiment where different kinds of animals were pressured into watching sexual intercoarse of two people of the same sex. After some time the animals even though of the same sex started to have sexual intercoarse even though it has been proven before that animals are not born with gay instintcts, and DON'T develop them except for a few rare cases. But, after this kind of infulunce they just started mimicking what they saw.

In response to Kuza's comment. Homosexual practices were still taking place many hundreds of years ago when it was viewed as dirty and straight from the devil, that was punishable by death. How can homosexuality then be a product of social perversions if it is not socially acceptable. I think that you need to read some history books on "sex and gender". What constitutes a male and what constitutes a female arises out of society. Usually in homosexual couples..one is more "male" than the other, and one is more "female" than the other. So another argument could be that homosexual couples actually live as heterosexual couples...because although they may physically be identified as "male" or "female" in reality they may not feel as restricted in their sense of gender as society likes to portray. I think that homosexual marriage should be allowed because it still sticks to the whole principal of marriage....receiving a piece of paper to signify two peoples love for one another. Religion is very biased and narrow-minded....which is why I dont follow it. The truth path to life is inner-discovery and being able to follow a path designated by your own self, free of outside influence. Removing yourself from other peoples ideas, and organised religion actually brings you closer to God......thats what i think anyway.


Overall I liked this essay....it was short, sweet and to the point. I liked the way you pointed out the irrationality behind some of the homophobic arguments....very good. I am giving this essay 94% and a smiley face :)

Good work. You could have tied in sex change operations and how difficult it is for these people to be legally recognised as their new gender. Ironic, isn't it, in a society that prides itself on acceptance of multiculturalism, that these people find the lack of understanding and acceptance they so rightly deserve.

Although I disagree with gay marriage, I think your essay was well laid out. It seemed like your analysis was a little bit slanted in favor of gay marriage. The essay was easy to read and understand.

I agree that they should not be denied simple rights as marrage to thier spouses, i believe that so people are born homosexual, and i have to agree that some people are not a though a society it has made it ok to be some people just feel more confortable with the same sex partner. I beileve couples should be able to marry and adopt children and live happy lives just like every one else.............to each your own.

I agree with you, gay marriage should be allowed. I found your essay easy to read.

This is a free country therefore gay marriages should be allowed.


GOOD JOB!

I think gay marriages should be alowed. Who are we the judge other people. Gay or straight we are all are the same and should have the same rights.

I found your essay not to withold the standards of a senior. Your errors in spelling shows you are a very sloppy essay writer. I believe the only reason gays want to get married is to have the benefits such as insurance.........ect. I myself believe it is a sin. If they want to indulge in it then that is thier choice. If marrage is what they want. Let them wallow in it.

I totally agree that gay marriages should be allowed. They need to have the same rights and abilities as other married couples. Nice essay.